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Depression (Revised)
There is a man on the horizon, he moves slowly but at a steady pace. He is a tall man who, with long strides, walks with his black umbrella. His Victorian suit flaps in a dead wind as he moves down the path. An air of gloom and despair follows him and the grass dies at his feet. He is upon you now, followed closely by the Angel of Death, and his faceless head looks you in the eyes. He pulls the umbrella from his side and holding it above your head he smiles, as rain pours from the umbrella upon you.
His friends are here now, Sadness, Fear, Hate, just to name a few. The angel reaches out his arms, you urn to embrace him though you know not too. The rain quickens as clouds come over the land, and lightning burns your skin.
You fall to your knees and cry to the Heavens “O LORD! Hear my plea!”, and he does. An arrow falls from the Heavens, an arrow of gold bathed in the light of a thousand Suns. It strikes the Demon upon his tall top hat, piercing him deep. A light shines from the man as he begins to leave. The light is too much for him to handle, he leaves with along with his friends. All that remains is a scar, a memory, a dream of a thought of a whim, that’s all he needs to come back. But this time you know how to win.
©2006-2009 ~ruik
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:iconcherry-cow:
Thats really intense^_^ I have Manic Deppression and I know THat I couldn't have done a better job explaining it^_^

*favorites^_^

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When it seems that the heavens have betrayed me, I turn my troubles over to..... None other than_____~~~______ PARIS HILTON/ NICHOLE RICHIE^_^^_^_^_^_^

tHe sIMpLe LiFe ROX!!!
:iconruik:
Wow... Depression sucks and I'm only a mild depressent. Manic Depression would be like... Beastly.

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'When Nightmares become Dayplans.'
:iconcherry-cow:
I guess Its just something ya have to drag yourself along, "live through it" But there are alot of people who can help^_^ I kinda feel that ((and this is really sappy but...)) Hope is something that is required, Just to look foward to SOMETHING! To LIVE for something,

THanks for listening^_^ Im Nathan,
C ya around^_^

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When it seems that the heavens have betrayed me, I turn my troubles over to..... None other than_____~~~______ PARIS HILTON/ NICHOLE RICHIE^_^^_^_^_^_^

tHe sIMpLe LiFe ROX!!!
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I still haven't found that one thing that gets me through... Pure stuborness and religion is what gets me through right now.

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'When Nightmares become Dayplans.'
:iconcherry-cow:
Im struggling with that too, I guess we just have to try just about everything and see what works best.^_^ Sucks, but i guess thats just "One of those things" teeehehehe^_^

*being nosey* so whats your religion IF you don't mind me asking^_^

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When it seems that the heavens have betrayed me, I turn my troubles over to..... None other than_____~~~______ PARIS HILTON/ NICHOLE RICHIE^_^^_^_^_^_^

tHe sIMpLe LiFe ROX!!!
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Christianity, Church of Christ.

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'When Nightmares become Dayplans.'
:iconcherry-cow:
^_^cool, me too, well, my parents are catholic, but I'm just "plain ole christian"

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When it seems that the heavens have betrayed me, I turn my troubles over to..... None other than_____~~~______ PARIS HILTON/ NICHOLE RICHIE^_^^_^_^_^_^

tHe sIMpLe LiFe ROX!!!
:iconruik:
Really Catholocism is "plain old Christian" 'cause it came first XD

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'When Nightmares become Dayplans.'
:iconcherry-cow:
True, but I guess Im not into all that, rosary, know your saints stuff^_^

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When it seems that the heavens have betrayed me, I turn my troubles over to..... None other than_____~~~______ PARIS HILTON/ NICHOLE RICHIE^_^^_^_^_^_^

tHe sIMpLe LiFe ROX!!!

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